课外培训班

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As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive.

 

  Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

  1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班

  2. 有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班,有些人则认为没有必要

  3. 你的观点

  ● 审题概述●

  这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段,概述各种各样培训班的状况。第二段,论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。第三段,重点阐述你对此的看法。

  【范文】Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

  All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.

  Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that it’s far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than get knowledge into our head.

  As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.

  ◇第一段思路点评:第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起,第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。

  ◇语言点提示:

  (1)a great diversity of各种各样的

  (2)mushrooming迅速扩散、增加

  (3)language crash courses语言速成课程

  ◇第二段思路点评:先用一句对比式地摆出两种不同的观点,再分别详述他们的看法。

  ◇语言点提示:注意连接词语while,The former,They,The latter group of people等的使用,强化了上下文之间的连贯性。

  ◇第三段思路点评:辩证地论述你对参加各类培训班的看法。

  ◇语言点提示:

  (1)as far as I am concerned我认为,就我而言

  (2)counter-productive适得其反的、事与愿违的

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